When I’m Alone…..
Devashree Vakil
When I’m alone, I feel akin to none!
In crowded squares it is that I feel lone,
Friends buzz me all day on the ‘phone,
And I avoid talking, saying I’m not home!!
When I’m alone, every task is forgone,
I overlook to see my soul as ma ‘own,
With time, I repay each loan
Though I forget to check my skin tone!
When I’m alone, the Earth seems to moan,
It mocks me – my hair windblown,
The tunes of Mozart seem but a bee’s drone,
While loneliness appears; its skills honed
My heart gets desperate for a clone
And then, off goes my phone,
I hear a melodious ringtone,
And I know I’m not alone!!!
Devashree Vakil
When I’m alone, I feel akin to none!
In crowded squares it is that I feel lone,
Friends buzz me all day on the ‘phone,
And I avoid talking, saying I’m not home!!
When I’m alone, every task is forgone,
I overlook to see my soul as ma ‘own,
With time, I repay each loan
Though I forget to check my skin tone!
When I’m alone, the Earth seems to moan,
It mocks me – my hair windblown,
The tunes of Mozart seem but a bee’s drone,
While loneliness appears; its skills honed
My heart gets desperate for a clone
And then, off goes my phone,
I hear a melodious ringtone,
And I know I’m not alone!!!
9 comments:
very nicely written i just happened to read them on the way..
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depicts the dilemma of human desires...when u r surrounded u wana be alone and when ur alone..u want smone..
good work !
Chandrashekhar
A nice first post!!!..keep it up!!
very sweet :)
somebody will soon buzz ur phone..lol
Yeah guys - thanks for the prompt comments! It s pretty "senti" for my first post, but since it s my creation, I couldnt help posting it on here.
It's a really nice first post! An 'aaaa' rhyme scheme in poetry is so rarely seen nowadays! :)
Hey Devashree
I thought penn state was a nice joyous place - then why such a deep emotional tone to your writings? Anyway it's a good poem but be cheerful in life.
I remeber i read dis b4 ..........this is da same one rite..>???
nice start...keep the flow going with other posts !
"My heart gets desperate for a clone
And then, off goes my phone,
I hear a melodious ringtone,
And I know I’m not alone!!!"
iRead, iThink, iLike.... :)
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